增加细节引起的破句缺少主语或动词，或者主语和动词都缺少。它们往往以下面的词语开头:for example，also，except，such as，including，especially，among，like，specially，for instance，as well as，but，besides。这些词后接名词时不能单独存在，而只能是句子的部分。修改的方法如下。
1．把破句与其前面具有完整意义的句子连接起来。例如:
误:He read in a consumer magazine that the ingredients in many cold medicines do not help a cold.Except for the aspirin in them.He could buy aspirin by himself at a much lower price.
正:He read in a consumer magazine that the ingredients in many cold medicines do not help a cold except for the aspirin in them.
2.把破句加上主语和谓语动词,使其成为一个完整的句子。例如:(www.xing528.com)
误:The class often starts late.Eor example，yesterday at 9：15 instead of at 9 sharp.
正:The class often starts late.Eor example，yesterday it began at 9：15 instead of at 9 sharp.
3.改变必要的词使破句成为它前面的句子的一部分。
误:He failed a number of courses before he earned his disagree.Among them，English，Physics，Biology.
正:Among the courses he failed before he earned his degree were English，Physics，Biology.
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