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习作1(初三1班赵天齐 毛筠学生)
I'd like to recommend my classmate,Li Hua.In my opinion,he is both helpful and warm-hearted,and he is the most suitable to be a student model.
I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset.He cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English.With his help,I made great progress in English and became increasingly interested in it.(www.xing528.com)
What's more,he tries his best to contribute to our class,especially in cleaning up our classroom and organizing all kinds of activities.He often takes up the heaviest work willingly,such as mopping the floor or cleaning the windows.All our classmates admire him for his hard work and sense of responsibility.
I feel lucky to have such a great friend and he has set a good example to all of us.
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