你姐姐的朋友张丽想当一名英语教师。去年，她在一所小学做志愿者教师，教孩子们唱英语歌、朗读英语故事、组织英语俱乐部等。通过这次志愿活动，她发现自己的英语口语有了很大的进步，并且性格上也有了变化。请你根据所给情景和提示词语，为学校英语俱乐部写一篇稿件，谈谈张丽的经历和变化，以及你对此事的感受。文章的开头已给出。
提示词：teach，read，organize an English club，improve，used to，shy...
习作1（初三4班 赵鹏辉 毛筠李岩学生）
Zhang Li，a friend of my sister's，wants to be an English teacher when she grows up.Last year she volunteered at a primary school.She taught the young students to sing English songs and read English stories.She even organized an English club.The students felt very happy，and improved their English a lot.It was the same with Zhang Li.Her speaking skill improved a lot，too.She didn't use to make complete sentences，but now she is quite different.She can speak English really well.I think it was one of the secrets to becoming a good language learner.As the saying goes，“Practice makes perfect.”
As for personality，she also changed a lot.She used to be shy，but now she is more outgoing.As we put it，“Kill two birds with one stone.”Being a volunteer was really a good experience for her.
As time goes by，we all change with it.What do you think of Zhang Li's experience？It's your turn！
本文结构严谨、脉络清晰。作者详细描述了“张丽”在志愿者活动中所做的一系列事情，又用少量的笔墨简写了她参加志愿者活动的变化和收获。文章语言丰富流畅，作者使用了格言和谚语以及多变的句式，文章上下连贯，是一篇非常优秀的习作。（张景徽老师点评）
习作2（初三3班 李涟清 毛筠李岩学生）(www.xing528.com)
Zhang Li，a friend of my sister's，wants to be an English teacher when she grows up.Last year she volunteered at a primary school.She did a lot of activities with the local students.For example，she taught the students to sing English songs，read English stories.She even organized an English club for them！The students were very happy.They learned a lot from these activities.After this experience，Zhang Li changed a lot.First of all，her spoken English has improved.She didn't use to be a good English speaker，but now，she can have conversations with foreigners very easily.Her personalities also changed dramatically.She wasn't very outgoing，but now she's a sunny lady and always carries a big smile.People sure change！
All in all，she learned a lot from her experience，and I'm sure that she'll become a wonderful English teacher.
本文覆盖了试题所要求的所有内容要点，运用了较多的语法结构和丰富的词汇，使用了列举和对比修辞手法，行文连贯、表达清晰、语言流畅、结构层次分明。（张景徽老师点评）
习作3（初三3班 祝莹 毛筠李岩学生）
Zhang Li，a friend of my sister's，wants to be an English teacher when she grows up.Last year she volunteered at a primary school.She thinks it was an amazing experience for her.She used to be a shy girl and was afraid of speaking in front of others.But to our surprise，when she taught at the primary school，she not only sang English songs to the students and read English stories，but also organized an English club.She got along well with her students and they often communicated with each other in English.So they both improved a lot in their English speaking skills.When she came back，she was totally a new man.She became outgoing and really talkative.She is very popular with people around her.
To sum up，everything is changing and we should change in a positive way，just like Zhang Li.
本文结构严谨、语言丰富、行文流畅自然。作者运用了丰富的词汇和句式，使用了but，so等关联词，把“张丽”在志愿者活动中所做、所感以及她的变化描写得细致清楚，结尾紧扣主题。（张景徽老师点评）
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