假设你是Alan的朋友，请给他写一封回信，针对他成绩较弱的科目给他提些建议。Dear Li Ping，
How is everything going？
I just received my report card of my end-of-year exams.I did well in some subjects，but I still have some problems.My English teacher said I'm weak in English.That's true.I can't understand what the teacher says in class.And my math teacher didn't think I was hard-working enough.It's just that I find math really difficult.
What should I do？Can you help me？
习作1（初三1班 李安宁 毛筠学生）
Dear Alan，
I'm sorry to hear that you are in trouble.But don't worry！I really hope the following suggestions of mine might help you.
First of all，I think you need to improve your English.You must realize how important it is.You said you couldn't understand what the teacher said in class，so why don't you ask the teacher for help after class？It seems difficult，but you won't make progress if you don't have a try.And have you considered listening to some English songs？It really helps a lot.As for math，to my mind，listening carefully in class is always the most important part.And if I were you，I would do my homework every day and do more exercises in order to make a big difference.
As we put it，“The first step is the hardest.”But I believe nothing is impossible to a willing heart.So don't hesitate and solve the problem at once！I'm sure you will make progress day by day.
Wish you good luck！
Yours，(www.xing528.com)
Li Ping
本文以书信的格式向同学提出关于如何学好英语的建议。语言简练、准确，层次鲜明，句式多样，富于变化。作者恰当运用所学的宾语从句、条件状语从句等句型及谚语“The first step is the hardest.”“But I believe nothing is impossible to a willing heart.”使文章内容变得更生动、形象。作者甚至尝试运用虚拟语气表明自己的观点，以加强说服力。（李燕南老师点评）
习作2（初三1班 李赞毛筠学生）
Dear Alan，
You did well in some subjects，didn't you？Well done！But it seems that you have also bumped into troubles.Don't worry.Some suggestions of mine might help.
First of all，it's important for you to learn English well because it is the key to communicating with the whole world.If you can't understand the teacher，ask him for help.He will certainly help with your problems.Listening to some English programs will do good to you，too.In this way you can not only improve your listening skills gradually，but also can open up your mind to the outside world as well.As the saying goes，“Little by little，one goes far.”How about math？Well，I suggest you do some exercises every day.Insist on it，and your progress will be incredible！
On the whole，“No mill，no meal.”I believe you will make a big difference with perfect habits of learning.And I'd be at your service at any time.
Yours，
Li Ping
本文以书信的格式向同学提出关于学习方法的建议。文章开头以设问的形式更突出了主题。句子连接自然流畅、内容完整、思路清晰。词汇既丰富又恰当运用了“Little by little，one goes far.”“No mill，no meal.”等谚语使得文章变得更活灵活现，更具感染力。（李燕南老师点评）
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