北京2008年奥运会后，越来越多的外国人关注北京、想了解北京。请你写一篇文章，从以下几个方面介绍北京：
1）places of interest；2）food；3）shopping；4）transportation；5）others（可选写）。
下列词汇仅供参考使用。
places of interest名胜，the Palace Museum故宫，the Temple of Heaven天坛，Bird's Nest鸟巢，Water Cube水立方，by light rail乘轻轨，rent a bike租辆自行车，Beijing Duck北京烤鸭，hot pot火锅
习作1（初三1班 杨慕雯 毛筠学生）
For your next vacation，why not consider Beijing？Beijing is one of the liveliest cities in Asia，and it has a charming culture.There's just so much to see and do here.
There are many places of interest in Beijing.The Summer Palace is one of the leading spots.It was built in Qing Dynasty as a royal park.We can learn authentic Chinese architecture from it.It's not only educational，but also beautiful.While wandering near the lake，rowing near the green hills，just look up to the clear blue sky，take a deep breath to feel the fresh air and have a touch of the water.Nothing could be better！
Going hungry after all your sightseeing？Why not have a taste of traditional Chinese food？Beijing Duck will surely capture your taste-bud.
Those who wish to go shopping in Beijing should head to Wangfujing，the biggest pedestrian area in Beijing.You name it，the shops have it.
It's rather convenient and cheap to get around in Beijing.You can either go by light rail or by bus.
That is not all.Do come and enjoy yourself！Beijing is the very city you are looking for！
本文从名胜、饮食、购物、交通四个方面介绍了旅游名城北京，文笔流畅自然。重点以故宫为例，描述了北京的魅力。文中用到了“Why not...？”“not only...，but also”等句型和一些习语搭配，使用准确恰当，给文章增加了色彩。（张莉老师点评）
习作2（初三2班 王冀韬 毛筠学生）
For your next vacation，why not consider visiting Beijing？Beijing has held the 29th Olympics successfully，and it's one of the most beautiful and liveliest cities in Asia.Now，let me introduce Beijing to you.
The Palace Museum，the Temple of Heaven，the Great Wall...Wow，there are many places of interest to visit in Beijing.You can learn Chinese history and culture in these fantastic places.Time goes by and Beijing has developed quickly.Many modem and creative buildings like Bird's Nest and Water Cube have been built and there are many beautiful parks that have many trees in Beijing now.The transportation is more convenient than before because of Beijing's development.
Another reason to choose Beijing is a variety of food here.Beijing Duck，hot pot...the delicious food here will surely make you enjoy yourself.And if you're fond of shopping，Beijing is a very good place.The shops here will certainly meet your needs.
So you see，Beijing has everything—beautiful views，delicious food，exciting things to do...Look，Beijing is waving her hands welcoming you！What are you waiting for？Go to Beijing and enjoy yourself！(www.xing528.com)
本文介绍了名城北京。首尾呼应、衔接自然、语言精确、重点突出。尤其一些描述性词汇的使用体现出小作者的语言功力。（张莉老师点评）
习作3（初三1班 毕烨 毛筠学生）
Do you want to have a perfect vacation？Are you looking for entertainment？Why not consider visiting Beijing？Beijing is the capital of China and is one of the most convenient cities in Asia.Beijing is a fascinating city full of ancient buildings！I think visiting the Summer Palace is a great choice；also you can feast your eyes on Bird's Nest，one of the most famous places in Beijing.
Then，you can enjoy eating various kinds of food.If I were you，I wouldn't go home without eating Beijing duck！Just follow your nose and have a try，you will never forget it！
What's more，shopping in Beijing is also fantastic.It's usually convenient to go to the shopping centers by light rail.The different kinds of modem things will make you excited！
As the saying goes，“To see for yourself is worth all the books of travel.”So what are you waiting for？Choose Beijing，choose a surprise！
本文以疑问句开篇，娓娓道来，介绍北京作为旅游胜地的理由。小作者语言简练，对于较难掌握的虚拟语气也能准确恰当使用。结尾段引用名言，更增加了可信度。结尾句“Choose Beijing，choose a surprise”简单有力、画龙点睛。（张莉老师点评）
习作4（初三1班 郑羽桐 毛筠学生）
The 2008 Olympic Games brought us a new and marvelous Beijing.But do you want to know something about traveling around Beijing？Here I'd like to provide you with some information.
Of course，the Palace Museum is one of the most famous vacation spots in the world.Walking in it and enjoying the smell of woods will bring you into a wonderland.It's also a good place to get in touch with Chinese history.What's more？And you shouldn't go home without visiting the Bird's Nest and the Water Cube.Beijing really has lots of places of interest worth seeing.No wonder more and more people want to visit Beijing these years.
To get to the spots，it's usually convenient to take the bus or the light rail.Renting a bike is also a good choice.
And Beijing has lots of things that can give you a good chance to feast your eyes.Beijing Duck，Hot Pot，dumplings...Your mouth is watering，right？
As for shopping，Beijing is the paradise for the shoppers.Things are so cheap here and you can buy really good things with a little money.
To cut a long story short，for you next vacation，why not consider visiting Beijing？And I believe the ideas of traveling in Beijing will surely amaze you.
本文以2008年北京奥运会做开头引入，介绍了北京在旅游、交通、饮食和购物等方面的引人入胜之处。小作者恰当使用了“provide sb.with sth.”“No wonder”“be worth doing”等短语和句型。整篇文章一气呵成、通畅自然。（张莉老师点评）
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